China’s Ministry of Education issued a new regulation allowing primary and middle school teachers to take disciplinary actions against their students, to which the public respond with different opinions. (29wds)
(一件事引起不同的观点，有很多表达方式，但是这种还是很是很独特的：…, to which the public respond with different opinions.)
Personally, the policy facilitates students’ sound growth. First, it can impress them by the importance of rules and regulations, which are the cornerstone of a good community. Those who break them but get away with punishment will take it for granted and likely commit crimes in future. Besides, it hangs like Damocles' Sword and help cultivate self-discipline.
However, the policy serves its purpose only when applied properly. For one thing, physical punishment should be accompanied by psychological help so that pupils can realize the root of their misbehavior. For another, it shouldn’t do harm to their health, not to mention insulting them.
In conclusion, since the disciplinary action can mend one’s way and keep schools running on the track, why should we say no to it?. (126wds)
写作思路上：从两个方面：1. 规矩的重要性 2.有利于学生的自律。
1.说让人意识到重要性，可选词汇很多，我用的是impress…by the importance of….后面的非限制性定从实际上是具体说明重要性为何，此处用了比喻：the cornerstone of a good community
Personally, the policy facilitates students’ sound growth.
However, the policy serves its purpose only when applied properly.